rayofmemory's Diaryland Diary ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ::Tina's Spelling Bee:: This is my review from Pathos Enmity. And I know I asked for it, but after reading their review of my diary...it makes me want to review their review. *pulling hair out now* RayofMemory Username/Tittle:4/10 Walk The Sky must be an inside ting because i really dont get why you chose that for your tittle. Its a good tittle but not for your entries. your username isnt ne thing great its alright though. Its just kind of good enough for me nothing spectacular. Layout:3/10 This was the plainest layout i have ever seen. It white and more white, a white girl, some more white and a little pink. The Girls clothes are the only thing that bring color. im Glad she wasnt wearing white. But she does have a great body.(off subject)And i hate the little screen that you read your entries from, it is extremely small. And you dont use ne type of font but really thats not all that important. Navigation:5/10 Navigation was fine all of your links were on the side and easy to find. I was a little upset to not find us listed. And one of your links do not work. Frequency:8/10 Although u dont have a great deal of entries for this month you have made up for that in other months. i love the fact that you have entries dateing back to 2000. Wich is great. Content:8/10 I liked your diary becausae of the amount of emotions you put into your writing. At times it was a little boreing but its not like there are the biig things that happen to someone evryday of their life. It just not realistic. And the entry entittled Let Go, was the entry i liked the most simply because i am the same way. I have some extreme problems with letting go. But sometimes i just give up with it because i know i'm only making matters worse. Brownie Points:3/10 Your diary was a good read. Total:31/50 -starkie- 10:55 p.m. - 07.24.04 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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